Feedback For My Story Please

The Shadow Realm Chronicles: Maeve

I am looking for anyone who can read and give me feed back. Let me know what you think, what I can correct and if there are parts that need more clarification.  I thank you in advance.

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The Marks’ family is cursed. Cursed and living a life controlled by the shadows and It all began with Maeve. Poor sweet innocent Maeve was transformed from a loving mother into a creature of the night. The Shadow King has been playing with her and her family. Does he love her or is Maeve just another pawn in his schemes. Will her family fight for her or leave her? Will she fight to get back to them or succumb to the shadows?

 

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